9th July 2019 — Jaydon
Creative Writing
Who is your character and where is it happening? Jerry and it is happening when he is in court getting sentenced.
What is your inciting incident and how do you get there? When the judge reveals his sentence.
Where do you cross your threshold? When Jerry goes to prison.
How does the action rise? When he escapes prison
When does your main character get knocked down? He finds out his son has moved countries.
Why does your character get back up? he goes and finds his son
“I hereby sentence Jerry lunderguard to 5 years imprisonment